
I dreamt that I could fly
A string, stopped me from flying
Couldn’t let go couldn’t rise high
To reach the sky, kept trying
Being tied up was the problem
I decided! Have to get detached
Cutting off the thread, felt awesome
Free I am, no strings attached
This is synonymous to the numerous strings that we get hooked onto in life. Some keep us rotating in the same place. Since we are moving we fail to realise that we still are hooked to a string that’s stopping us from flying higher.
Each line has six words. This is in response to Shweta’s Six word story prompt: Balloon . Thanks for hosting it Shweta. 😊 and thanks to you all for stopping by and reading 😊
A profound message conveyed through your simple words HS ❤️
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Thank you so much R, so glad you liked it.
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Loved it! Though sometimes you need the strings and weight to keep you grounded 😉
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Absolutely!! I love your thought! Totally agree , thanks for the feedback
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A beautiful message is few words of poetry!❤
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Thank you so much dear Zi 😊
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Beautiful lines, HS!!
Although, sometimes the string anchors you, doesn’t it?
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Absolutely… it’s so necessary to stay grounded 😀🙌
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Such a consise post with such a deep meaning.
In life we often stay so much attached to the strings that we forget to fly, same as a bird who’s caged for so long forgets it has a capability to fly.
Beautiful post Smiley💛
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Very true dear Rashmi .. exactly the thoughts I had when I wrote this. We draw our own boundaries and get comfortable in there … going beyond seems too much work when in actual, sky is the limit!
Thank you so much dear Rashmiii ❤️😊
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True that, sky is the limit!
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Wow, a perfect reminder to me! Thank you HS for always coming with inspiring poems. ❤️❤️😘😘
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Thank you so much Preeths.. I get the same inspiration from yours 😬ya mutual
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🙌🤗
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Sometimes all we need is to let go to fly high. Beautiful message.
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Isn’t it!! Thank you so much Yeshu 😊
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Brilliant!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Each line speaks volumes. It’s true! Getting detached is always a better idea than being dragged around. Well said, HS! 🙂
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Thanks a lot dear Aswathy 😊
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