
In response to Sadjeโs What do you see prompt
‘Don’t come with me through the dark’ you said
‘Stand here, and be my guiding light instead’
What is taking you so long?
Come back fast do not prolong
This fire is grilling up my bald head
A/N: At first I thought the guy is in a dungeon, finding his way out and so, some lines popped up in my head as to how adventurous his journey would be through the dark paths.
Seeing the starry skies above and no paths seen on either sides, I wondered what is this guy upto? Why is he holding a torch standing there? May be his girlfriend went to the woods for an โemergencyโ call? and hence i came up with this Limerick ๐. Syllable count 9/9/7/7/9
Bottom line is, I have nothing new to write ๐
ยฉ ruhappysoul
Haha! Nice take Ru! I really love how efficiently you take up the prompts!โค
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๐thanks so much for saying that Zish. This really cheered me up as I have a blank page for now ๐ฌ
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My pleasure! I know you’ll come up with something beautiful for sure!โค
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Nothing yet
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๐ Good one, HS!
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Thanks a lot Aswathy ๐
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I like your lighthearted story! Thanks for joining in
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Thanks so much for your feedback, Sadje! Itโs my pleasure, always..
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Niicee!
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Thankssss:-)
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Welcomeeee:)
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That’s a different one!๐๐
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๐ yes I thought twice, if should I post it or not …. not my usual ๐
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I think this would be the most different take. I call you ‘smart’ definitely not without a reason.๐
Great one, HSโค๏ธ
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๐thanks a lot Hema .. I feel flattered!
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Haha, this one’s nice, HS. ๐
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Thank you so much kitty ๐
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You are welcome, HS. ๐
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I too noticed the stary sky quite late. And your thought, it’s humorous and unique! ๐
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๐๐thank you very much Anisha
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Good one !
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Thanks a lot Era ๐
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๐๐ค
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Fabulous one written so nicely ๐
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Thanks a lot Dulcy โฃ๏ธ
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Haha, that’s really cool.
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๐ฌ๐ฌtried something different Jude. Thanks ๐
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Wow Hs!
That ended totally unexpected and for better.๐ ๐
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๐ thanks Chetna.. long time no see …
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Umm…just a bit busy with some stuff. How have you been???
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๐Iโm good ..going on..
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The first two lines gave me a thought you are going to give a hard message and the last lines ended so light. I wonder how can you think a poem like this. Too good dear friend.
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๐the โLimerickโ poem should have a humorous last line .. so tried this. Thank you so much dear Subbashini ๐โฃ๏ธ
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Not bad, with nothing to think of, you come up with such a nice and unique one HS ๐๐ป๐
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๐Iโm glad you think so about this post R! Thank you so much ๐
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Nice take!!!
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Thank you Aashi ๐
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Well done, Ru. Excellent. ๐
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Thanks a lot for your feedback Jeff.. Iโm glad you liked it…. thanks for dropping by ๐
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Nice lines written
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Thank you ๐
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Good one, HS๐
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Thank you Shruthi ๐ thanks for making time and reading through my blog. Means a lot!
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Always my pleasure ๐
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Such a pretty piece dear !!
I just loved how it can be read so easily โค
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Thanks a lot dear Nima .. a Limerick should be funny only in the last line.. Iโm not good with humour. Yet gave it a try ๐
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It was beautiful dear ๐ โค
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