“Will forgive you, I deserve peace! “
My six word story in response to Shweta’s 6WSP. Prompt word for this week is Peace. Thank you for hosting this Shweta.
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Some questions have no answers
Need to let go of the past,
Will have to forgive someone
For an apology never asked!
Life teaches, learn the lesson
Never blame yourself, please
Forgive him for hurting you,
Most important is your inner peace.
I had a friend in mind when I wrote this. Sharing it here along with my take for Six Word Story prompt.
I loved all of them especially the last one. I hope that you have forgiven this friend and found the peace you needed. Thanks for joining in, HS ๐
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This poem, is a friends experience … my โlet goโ done and dusted long ago ๐thank you Shweta
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For an apology never asked?
For forgiveness never sought. ๐
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How dare WP moves the Princeโs comment to spam!!! ๐ thanks for letting me know Bharath๐
Yes sometimes it happens .. you will have to forgive a person for being heartless .. though he doesnโt say sorry for that ..
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Haha okay that was a good one.
I was wondering why my comments werenโt there. Thought you were offended by something I said and deleted the comment. Thank you.
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Oh my God! No way ๐
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I have my doubts. ๐ฌ
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Actually itโs tough to offend me … ๐
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It shouldnโt be. Offence is the best defence sometimes.
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In the war of words!?
Hail the prince!
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My gratitude, great queen.
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True we need to let go of the past and make peace to our inner soul! ๐
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Most important isnโt it.. ๐thank you very much for your feedback..
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Very rightly said! Great poem ๐
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Thank you Prerna .. glad you liked it ๐
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My pleasure ๐
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Peace of mind over piece of mind, any day ๐
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Yeah right! Well said ๐Peace, piece reminds me I have no peas at home .. literally!
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So true
In end, inner peace matters โบ
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Glad you agree too Era ๐
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Rightly said!
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๐thank you Akshita ๐
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Rightly said. Often very difficult to do though ๐
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Yes R! ๐
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Poignant and beautifully constructed
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Thank you so much Jude ๐
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Very much my pleasure ๐ผ
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“I deserve peace.”
Thank you for reminding me this.
I need to let go of lot of things for my own self, for my peace.
Nice post, and nice poem as well.
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Letting go is not easy at all.. but worth trying.. Thank you Rashmi โค๏ธ
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Thank you for saying this dear friend, I will have in mind all through my life.
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Thanks a lot for your feedback Subbashini .. glad you liked the content ๐
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Hmmm yes.. Even I have someone in my mind.. I never find a reason to forgive that particular human !! But am not losing my peace.. ๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฌ
You have given a series of good vibe lines Happy Soul ๐
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๐๐thank you Nima .. as long as you are peaceful itโs ok ๐. some peopleโs acts are very difficult to forgive ..
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Yeah… more painful if you have kept them close !!
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Very much!
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Great message!!
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Thank you Aashi ๐
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