
He stayed alone in his big mansion
This well known scientist, Mr Smith.
His patents had earned him millions
But had no one to enjoy it with.
One day he heard a knock on the door
His good old friend dropped in to say hi.
They were meeting after 20 years
He had a reason to drop by.
He was broke and lived on charity,
Along with four other necessitous men.
They were looking around for another shelter,
Requested Smith to accommodate till then.
The mansion had atleast ten free rooms
Smith found his purpose, he found his calling!
He decided to help these needy,
This empty life, now had a meaning!
They were overjoyed with Smith’s offer,
It was a welcome blessing for their misery.
They lived together next few months,
They bonded well, together, like family.
Half past four, everyday, they had tea together,
They talked of everything under the sun.
Today was extra special thought Smith,
He was looking forward for some fun!
Carefully he laid out the table,
Arranged the ceramic cups so neat!
After many years on his special day,
He had people around to greet!
He blew the candle, he cut his cake,
He tapped his feet for his birthday song
Reviving fond memories over tea,
His heart was happy after so long!
This beautiful mind never realised
He saw things that weren’t there!
The tea cups had never moved!
And the table always had a single chair!
– HappySoul
A/N: He was Schizophrenic
In response to Sadje’s What do you see prompt. Please click on the link above for guidelines and feel free to participate.
Awaiting your feedback my dear friends! Thanks a lot for reading 😊
Sadly beautiful!
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Thanks Harsh!
Too long a read? Too lengthy? Wanted to write a short story but as I edited I couldn’t make it short!
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No, it’s perfectly good. You don’t need to change anything.
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🙌Thank you!
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As long as he was happy, he should be fine! Thanks for joining in the challenge with this very interesting story.
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I had the same thought Sadje!😊
My pleasure, thanks for hosting! 😇
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You’re welcome 😇
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Woohoo! Nice story narrated!
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Thank you Aashi 😊
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Nice take HS. Like the poetic tale style with deep dark layers of emotions woven into it!!
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Thanks a lot R! Watched Beautiful mind movie recently, this lockdown! Side effects! 😊
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The idea you chose was nice and the way you penned it down is just like the icing on the cake.💜💫😍
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Thank you so much Chetna, all smiles here.
Feeling like eating cake though ☺️
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Pleasure is mine.💜
I am sending it by courier to you.😂😂
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😂
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This is heartbreakingly beautiful. But he’s happy and that’s all that matters. Great take on the prompt, HA
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*Oops, sorry. HS
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No prob 😊
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Agree! His happiness is not troubling anyone, anyway👍
Thank you Shweta❤️
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Wow, this is deeply moving, Beautifully written
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Thank you so much Jude😊Glad you liked it.
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My pleasure 😊
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So beautifully written!!!
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Thank you Era ❤️
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It’s a pleasure 😊😊
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Oh my! But he was happy, that’s what matters. Nice take, HS. 🙂
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Thanks Aishwarya 😊
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You are welcome, HS. 🙂
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Oh Ho… Unexpected ending but I loved the style of tale telling !
Beautiful Happy Soul 🙂
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Thank you so much Nima ❤️
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You are most welcome dear 😊
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