Not again ! These pesky creatures
On my childrenโs blood they feast!
Drowning them each in water,
Want them all deceased !
Ruthlessly I captured them
They wiggled between my finger!
Carefully I put them in water,
Dint notice my concerned daughter.
Tears I saw in my childโs eyes
She saw my cavalier attitude !
โYou may have killed a mother there,
Her orphaned babies would brood!โ
Word count : 64
In response to Sammy Cox’s weekend writing prompt
Note : A trial. I’m not sure if it fits the prompt appropriately. Feedback most welcome ๐
The story behind : This just happened last month. Saw a few rashes on my daughter’s hands and I checked the beds! Saw these nasty creatures and I knew how hard it is to get rid of it. If I kill it , by beating , and in case it was carrying eggs, then the eggs won’t die and may hatch in few days . So I had to drown it in water, the pest control guy had told us last time ! I asked my daughter to get some water in a jar and I began the process of eliminating these insects ! My daughter saw them drown and started crying !! she told me I am killing a mommy or a daddy ! ๐คญ๐
I explained that these are insects and trouble us by biting us through the night. We have to tackle before it goes out of control . The answer dint convince her much though ! ๐โโ๏ธ
Good one ๐
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Thank you Era ๐
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Very nice take!
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Thank you Aashi ๐
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Aww….kids and their innocence โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ. Nice take HS!!
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Cavalier mommy here ๐ thanks R ๐
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Beautiful portrayal of mother’s love and children’s innocence. ๐
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Thank you so much ๐
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You are welcome. ๐
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Aww! That innocence ๐โค๏ธ
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๐yaa .. her concerned face, will be etched in my memory โค๏ธ
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I know ๐
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Your daughter is such a sweet soul. Bless her kind heart!
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โค๏ธoh so sweet of you . Thanks โค๏ธ
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What a sweet post! Made me smile ๐
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Thanks a lot Prerna โค๏ธ๐Iโm glad
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Girls are very sensitive. My younger sister and now my daughter, both behave in the same way. Loved the way you created verses with this incident.
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Right , girls are sensitive I guess . โค๏ธMy brother would help me kill cockroaches ๐
Thanks a lot Deeksha ๐
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Oh yes, sometimes I feel boys like to do such chores ๐
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Anyway, I kill cockroaches and even rats now, but dare not harm a lizard. They’ve earned my pity.
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They sure have earned ๐sweet of you to share this โค๏ธall smiles here
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Glad to have made you smile! Good day to you, happy soul. ๐
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Good day to you too โค๏ธ
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Your daughter reminds the little me.
I was once cleaning the shoe rack. I was around 10. I threw some eggs of lizards mistaking them for thermocol balls. They broke with flesh and blood. Only then, I realised they were eggs of some species.
I sat right there, and cried for about an hour until my mom returned home. Since then, I used to cry for many months whenever I see a lizard. Tough feelings as a kid, I must say.
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Awwww! Such stories touch my heart Anisha โค๏ธ๐. A childโs innocence at its best ! Itโs amazing how such memories stay etched in the mind !
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Very true! Innocence is the unique characteristic of childhood. ๐
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Very true ๐
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We gotta do such things many a times, isn’t it!
When we don’t have any reason to justify the act we end up doing in love for someone.๐ค
I enjoyed reading it.๐โจ
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You have a point ! So right ! I loved what you said ! โค๏ธ
Thanks Chetna ๐
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Pleasure is mine.๐
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